Writing term 1

For writing this term I have been doing a narative story this is one so far.

It was a dark gloomy day the rain was so fast that it stung. the sand was very wet

The pattend waves crash against the sea bed. As the water came to my feet I screemed because of

The frozeness. Alien ship stood strong on the beach.   

                                                    Describe the character 

Seth was a young boy training to be a mirene  17 years later he has his backpack

His camo armour with his m1 magnum ready too take down a alien ship